The sun as bright as a flood light
Hanging in the sky’s like a hanger on a washing line
People what it for them selves but they can’t have it
You can get close to it but still you can’t have it
I predict that in the future greedy men
Will try try to buy it
But still they will not own it for themselves
The sun is there for everyone and nobody can take it away from us
The sun is a beautiful as a bed of roses , mazes and many more flowers as bright as you can get
what a lovely sight to see
May 8, 2015 at 12:57 pm
Boring,but that’s just me I hate poems I much prefer raps than poems tho it is a bit blank as in colour
but i like it Mr stefano A
June 21, 2015 at 8:11 pm
“People what it for them selves”
Stefano, have you thought about changing this to “want it for themselves”? That would be the more standard way to write this. Poetic license is one thing but…
Also you need a full stop at the end!
I disagree with Mackai though, I did not find it boring at all.